First Pass

We just delivered the first pass of the PSA today. I had somewhat a rough first pass for class. But showing this rough pass helped me get some very useful information about the PSA which I didn't see before. One of the main concerns which I had was the fact that the camera movement was not a single continuos movement. One of the reasons for the continuos movement is because of the fact that I am animating some elements in C4D and some in AfterEffects. So what i hope to so is to bring the elements which I animated in AfterEffects in to C4D and place it accordingly in the C4D scene.

Some other comments which I were:

1. The mushroom cloud does not look like a mushroom cloud. 
2. The opening scene could use a little more of color because the way I have it right now, the opening scene is very dull. 
3. The breaking of the glass of the hour glass can be slowed down. 
4. Leveling the overall color in the animation since it jumps a lot. 
5. The ending was very well done but goes towards different style. May be unify the style within the animation to make it more coherent. 

I intend on fixing all of the problems which my instructor highlight. I will be posting some updates on the improvements soon. 

Here is the first pass of the animation which I have: